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Text replacement - "Zidromi" to "Zedromi"

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After speaking with the Writing Department on 3 July 2020

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‎The Rise of The Dominion

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‎The Rise of The Dominion

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‎The Zidromi War and Man's Fall

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 ===Creation===
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-* [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]], who predates time, created [[Lore:Zidromi|Zidromi]], his realm to rule from, and the [[Lore:Sheseth|Shesethos]] as his servants within it.
+* [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]], who predates time, created [[Lore:Zedromi|Zedromi]], his realm to rule from, and the [[Lore:Sheseth|Shesethos]] as his servants within it.
 * Driomi creates [[Lore:Ethesh|Ethesh]], and all life within it.
 ** Most important of all was the creation of [[Lore:Man|Man]] on the world of [[Lore:Jevreth|Jevreth]]. Men were placed on the continent of [[Lore:Althas|Althas]] in the forest of [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]].
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 ** Man was limited in their freedom significantly, with little understanding, but in them were the seeds of free will. As they were instructed, that free will expressed itself more and more.</div>
-===The Zidromi War and Man's Fall===
+===The Zedromi War and Man's Fall===
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-* While the realm of [[Lore:Man|Men]] grew, and as their free will became evident, '''The Zidromi War''' raged within [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]]'s realm. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_1|[1]]]
+* While the realm of [[Lore:Man|Men]] grew, and as their free will became evident, '''The Zedromi War''' raged within [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]]'s realm. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_1|[1]]]
 ** Those that rebelled against Driomi were cast out. The fallen Shesethos became known as the [[Lore:Drevril|Drevril]].
 * The Drevril, as has always been, plot to corrupt and destroy Driomi’s creation, starting with Man. They forged the [[Lore:Night Stone|Night Stones]], and cast them down to the realm of Men.

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 * Driomi creates [[Lore:Ethesh|Ethesh]], and all life within it.
 ** Most important of all was the creation of [[Lore:Man|Man]] on the world of [[Lore:Jevreth|Jevreth]]. Men were placed on the continent of [[Lore:Althas|Althas]] in the forest of [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]].
 ** Man was immortal and, in time, built a realm there.
-* Man was given the “[[Lore:Celestial|Celestial language]]” to communicate with one another, the heavenly tongue that the Shesethos have always used. This tongue has no written form.</div>
+** Man was limited in their freedom significantly, with little understanding, but in them were the seeds of free will. As they were instructed, that free will expressed itself more and more.</div>
 ===The Zidromi War and Man's Fall===
 <div class="toccolours mw-collapsible mw-collapsed" style="width:1000px">
-* While the realm of Men grew, '''The Zidromi War''' raged within [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]]'s realm, fought between those that wised to serve Driomi, and those that did not. Those that rebelled against Driomi were cast out.
+* While the realm of [[Lore:Man|Men]] grew, and as their free will became evident, '''The Zidromi War''' raged within [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]]'s realm. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_1|[1]]]
-** The fallen Shesethos became known as the [[Lore:Drevril|Drevril]].
+** Those that rebelled against Driomi were cast out. The fallen Shesethos became known as the [[Lore:Drevril|Drevril]].
 * The Drevril, as has always been, plot to corrupt and destroy Driomi’s creation, starting with Man. They forged the [[Lore:Night Stone|Night Stones]], and cast them down to the realm of Men.
-** [[Lore:Night Stone#The_Dominion_Stone|The Dominion Stone]] tempted Man to distrust Driomi and looked to its power to grow their realm and increase in prosperity.  Eventually, many elders believed and began using the Stone’s power, rejecting Driomi’s guidance. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_1|[1]]]
+** [[Lore:Night Stone#The_Dominion_Stone|The Dominion Stone]] tempted Man to distrust Driomi and looked to its power to grow their realm and increase in prosperity.  Eventually, many elders believed and began using the Stone’s power, rejecting Driomi’s guidance. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_2|[2]]]
 ** Over time, the people were all deceived and turned in defiance of Driomi.</div>
 ===The Rise of The Dominion===
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-* Men became mortal now that they are tainted with evil. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_2|[2]]]
+* Men became mortal now that they are tainted with evil. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_3|[3]]]
 * The realm of Man encompassed eight familiar tribes. One of the tribes (known later to history as "The Eighth Tribe") saw their great potential over the land and beasts, and suggested to the other seven that they commune  and organize together in a central location in [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]].
-** The Eighth Tribe divided the other seven tribes into working castes, each tribe tasked with providing different needs to the others, while the Eigth managed them. This foundation of civilization would later become known as [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]], ruled over by "[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]". [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_3|[3]]]
+** The Eighth Tribe divided the other seven tribes into working castes, each tribe tasked with providing different needs to the others, while the Eigth managed them. This foundation of civilization would later become known as [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]], ruled over by "[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]". [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_4|[4]]]
 * As the centuries passed, Man descended into ever greater evil until finally Men began to fear what they had brought on themselves. Many began to doubt The Majestic and their choice to follow the Stone. The Majestic began to oppress the people to keep them in line.
-* Realizing their mistake, many of the people in The Dominion began to seek [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]] again. One Man rose to lead them. Driomi heard this Man; he was appointed the first of the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]], and was given a new name: [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim]] [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_4|[4]]]
+* Realizing their mistake, many of the people in The Dominion began to seek [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]] again. One Man rose to lead them. Driomi heard this Man; he was appointed the first of the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]], and was given a new name: [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim]] [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_5|[5]]]
-* The words of Losdejim spread throughout The Dominion. The Seven rose up against The Majestic and the ruling Eighth Tribe. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_5|[5]]]
+* The words of Losdejim spread throughout The Dominion. The Seven rose up against The Majestic and the ruling Eighth Tribe. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_6|[6]]]
 ** The Seven overcame The Majestic and The Eighth Tribe. The Night Stone was destroyed and The Majestic was slain.
-* The remnants of the Eighth Tribe fled [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]]. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_6|[6]]]
+* The remnants of the Eighth Tribe fled [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]]. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_7|[7]]]
-* With the Night Stone destroyed, Losdejim was looked to as the de facto leader. The Dominion continued into a new age of uncertainty, but the people had mostly acknowledged Driomi again. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_7|[7]]]</div>
+* With the Night Stone destroyed, Losdejim was looked to as the de facto leader. The Dominion continued into a new age of uncertainty, but the people had mostly acknowledged Driomi again. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_8|[8]]]</div>
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 This section contains footnotes for the overall Timeline.
-# <div id="Note_1">[[Lore:Man|Man]] could not possessed or controlled by a Night Stone at this point in time.</div>
+# <div id="Note_1">Several of the [[Lore:Sheseth|Shesethos]] saw the free will in [[Lore:Man|Man]] as a malfunction and flaw, and rebelled against [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]].</div>
-# <div id="Note_2">Although they were mortal, their life spans were still of extraordinary length; no one noticed their mortality yet.</div>
+# <div id="Note_2">Man could not possessed or controlled by a Night Stone at this point in time.</div>
-# <div id="Note_3">"[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]" was the only known ruling figurehead of [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]]. It is unknown if he ever went by another title.
+# <div id="Note_3">Although they were mortal, their life spans were still of extraordinary length; no one noticed their mortality yet.</div>
-# <div id="Note_4">The meaning of [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim's]] name remained hidden. It was revealed when [[Lore:Noralar|Noralar]] is created twenty years later, a sign of [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi’s]] providence and sovereignty.
+# <div id="Note_4">"[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]" was the only known ruling figurehead of [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]]. It is unknown if he ever went by another title.
-# <div id="Note_5">The majority of the eighth division, however, stayed on the side of The Majestic.</div>
+# <div id="Note_5">The meaning of [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim's]] name remained hidden. It was revealed when [[Lore:Noralar|Noralar]] is created twenty years later, a sign of [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi’s]] providence and sovereignty.
-# <div id="Note_6">The survivors will divide into three groups:
+# <div id="Note_6">The majority of the eighth division, however, stayed on the side of The Majestic.</div>
 <ul><ul><ul><li> One group migrates to the East and settles near [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Thalomvob|Thalomvob]]. This group will hide in fear at first, but later repent of their sins and sue for peace with [[Lore:Gorandel (faction)|Gorandel]] (once the kingdom has been built and has expanded east to include Thalomvob). These people become known as the [[Lore:Thalom Sebairos|Thalom Sebairos]].</li>
 <li> The second group will vow to fight on against Driomi. They scatter into the lands of [[Lore:Althas|Althas]] and settle in small towns and villages. They later conceal who they are when the [[Lore:Anointed|The Anointed]] will later expand their realms. Others in this group will infiltrate and cause general problems for the Anointed in their early years.</li>
 <li> The third group will split off from the second a couple generations later. They will repent for their misdeeds and, as penance for their forbearers’ sins, will vow to fight for the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]] and help them fulfill their purposes. This group will become zealots that hold no allegiance towards any one faction, but only to the Diasairos themselves. Over time, they will spawn an order of zealots that include any who would seek penance for their past. Their numbers and validity shall be in flux throughout the millennia, but they will be an ever-present group (to some extent).</li></ul></ul></ul></div>
-<ol start="7"><li><div id="Note_7">By the end of this period, people began to realize their vulnerability to the passage of time, as more and more grow older and weaker.</div></li></ol>
+<ol start="8"><li><div id="Note_7">By the end of this period, people began to realize their vulnerability to the passage of time, as more and more grow older and weaker.</div></li></ol>
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 ** The Seven overcame The Majestic and The Eighth Tribe. The Night Stone was destroyed and The Majestic was slain.
 * The remnants of the Eighth Tribe fled [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]]. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_6|[6]]]
-* With the Night Stone destroyed, Losdejim was looked to as the de facto leader. The Dominion continued into a new age of uncertainty, but the people had mostly acknowledged Mellendil again. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_7|[7]]]</div>
+* With the Night Stone destroyed, Losdejim was looked to as the de facto leader. The Dominion continued into a new age of uncertainty, but the people had mostly acknowledged Driomi again. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_7|[7]]]</div>
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 ** The Eighth Tribe divided the other seven tribes into working castes, each tribe tasked with providing different needs to the others, while the Eigth managed them. This foundation of civilization would later become known as [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]], ruled over by "[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]". [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_3|[3]]]
 * As the centuries passed, Man descended into ever greater evil until finally Men began to fear what they had brought on themselves. Many began to doubt The Majestic and their choice to follow the Stone. The Majestic began to oppress the people to keep them in line.
-* Realizing their mistake, many of the people in The Dominion began to seek [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]] again. One Man rose to lead them. Mellendil heard this Man; he was appointed the first of the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]], and was given a new name: [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim]] [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_4|[4]]]
+* Realizing their mistake, many of the people in The Dominion began to seek [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]] again. One Man rose to lead them. Driomi heard this Man; he was appointed the first of the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]], and was given a new name: [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim]] [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_4|[4]]]
 * The words of Losdejim spread throughout The Dominion. The Seven rose up against The Majestic and the ruling Eighth Tribe. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_5|[5]]]
 ** The Seven overcame The Majestic and The Eighth Tribe. The Night Stone was destroyed and The Majestic was slain.

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 # <div id="Note_2">Although they were mortal, their life spans were still of extraordinary length; no one noticed their mortality yet.</div>
 # <div id="Note_3">"[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]" was the only known ruling figurehead of [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]]. It is unknown if he ever went by another title.
-# <div id="Note_4">The meaning of [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim's]] name remained hidden. It was revealed when [[Lore:Noralar|Noralar]] is created twenty years later, a sign of [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil’s]] providence and sovereignty.
+# <div id="Note_4">The meaning of [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim's]] name remained hidden. It was revealed when [[Lore:Noralar|Noralar]] is created twenty years later, a sign of [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi’s]] providence and sovereignty.
 # <div id="Note_5">The majority of the eighth division, however, stayed on the side of The Majestic.</div>
 # <div id="Note_6">The survivors will divide into three groups:

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 ===The Zidromi War and Man's Fall===
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-* While the realm of Men grew, '''The Zidromi War''' raged within [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]]'s realm, fought between those that wised to serve Mellendil, and those that did not. Those that rebelled against Mellendil were cast out.
+* While the realm of Men grew, '''The Zidromi War''' raged within [[Lore:Driomi|Driomi]]'s realm, fought between those that wised to serve Mellendil, and those that did not. Those that rebelled against Mellendil were cast out.
 ** The fallen Shesethos became known as the [[Lore:Drevril|Drevril]].
 * The Drevril, as has always been, plot to corrupt and destroy Mellendil’s creation, starting with Man. They forged the [[Lore:Night Stone|Night Stones]], and cast them down to the realm of Men.

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 ==Before recorded time==
-This period comes before [[Lore:Man|Man]] has numbered his days, so no dates in this period are certain. What is generally agreed upon by most historians are the order of their occurrence.
+This period came before [[Lore:Man|Man]] had numbered his days, so no dates in this period are certain. What is generally agreed upon by most historians are the order of their occurrence.
 ===Creation===
 <div class="toccolours mw-collapsible mw-collapsed" style="width:1000px">
-* [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]], who predates time, creates [[Lore:Zidromi|Zidromi]], his realm to rule from, and the [[Lore:Sheseth|Shesethos]] as his servants within it.
+* [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]], who predates time, created [[Lore:Zidromi|Zidromi]], his realm to rule from, and the [[Lore:Sheseth|Shesethos]] as his servants within it.
 * Mellendil creates [[Lore:Ethesh|Ethesh]], and all life within it.
 ** Most important of all was the creation of [[Lore:Man|Man]] on the world of [[Lore:Jevreth|Jevreth]]. Men were placed on the continent of [[Lore:Althas|Althas]] in the forest of [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]].
-** Man is immortal and, in time, builds a realm there.
+** Man was immortal and, in time, built a realm there.
-* Man is given the “[[Lore:Celestial|Celestial language]]” to communicate with one another, the heavenly tongue that the Shesethos have always used. This tongue has no written form.</div>
+* Man was given the “[[Lore:Celestial|Celestial language]]” to communicate with one another, the heavenly tongue that the Shesethos have always used. This tongue has no written form.</div>
 ===The Zidromi War and Man's Fall===
 <div class="toccolours mw-collapsible mw-collapsed" style="width:1000px">
-* While the realm of Men grows, '''The Zidromi War''' rages within [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]]'s realm, fought between those that wish to serve Mellendil, and those that do not. Those that rebelled against Mellendil are cast out.
+* While the realm of Men grew, '''The Zidromi War''' raged within [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]]'s realm, fought between those that wised to serve Mellendil, and those that did not. Those that rebelled against Mellendil were cast out.
-** The fallen Shesethos become known as the [[Lore:Drevril|Drevril]].
+** The fallen Shesethos became known as the [[Lore:Drevril|Drevril]].
-* The Drevril plot to corrupt and destroy Mellendil’s creation, starting with Man. They forge the [[Lore:Night Stone|Night Stones]], and cast them down to the realm of Men.
+* The Drevril, as has always been, plot to corrupt and destroy Mellendil’s creation, starting with Man. They forged the [[Lore:Night Stone|Night Stones]], and cast them down to the realm of Men.
-** [[Lore:Night Stone#The_Dominion_Stone|The Dominion Stone]] tempts Man to distrust Mellendil and look to its power to grow their realm and increase in prosperity.  Eventually, many elders believe and begin using the Stone’s power, rejecting Mellendil’s guidance. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_1|[1]]]
+** [[Lore:Night Stone#The_Dominion_Stone|The Dominion Stone]] tempted Man to distrust Mellendil and looked to its power to grow their realm and increase in prosperity.  Eventually, many elders believed and began using the Stone’s power, rejecting Mellendil’s guidance. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_1|[1]]]
-** Over time, the people are all deceived and turn in defiance of Mellendil.</div>
+** Over time, the people were all deceived and turned in defiance of Mellendil.</div>
 ===The Rise of The Dominion===
 <div class="toccolours mw-collapsible mw-collapsed" style="width:1000px">
-* Men becomes mortal now that they are tainted with evil. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_2|[2]]]
+* Men became mortal now that they are tainted with evil. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_2|[2]]]
-* The realm of Man encompasses eight familiar tribes. One of the tribes (known later to history as "The Eighth Tribe") saw their great potential over the land and beasts, and suggests to the other seven that they commune  and organize together in a central location in [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]].
+* The realm of Man encompassed eight familiar tribes. One of the tribes (known later to history as "The Eighth Tribe") saw their great potential over the land and beasts, and suggested to the other seven that they commune  and organize together in a central location in [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]].
-** The Eighth Tribe divides the other seven tribes into working castes, each tribe tasked with providing different needs to the others, while the Eigth manages them. This foundation of civilization will later become known as [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]], ruled over by "[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]". [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_3|[3]]]
+** The Eighth Tribe divided the other seven tribes into working castes, each tribe tasked with providing different needs to the others, while the Eigth managed them. This foundation of civilization would later become known as [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]], ruled over by "[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]". [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_3|[3]]]
-* As the centuries passed, Man descends into ever greater evil until finally people began to fear what they had brought on themselves. Many begin to doubt The Majestic and their choice to follow the Stone. The Majestic begins to oppress the people to keep them in line.
+* As the centuries passed, Man descended into ever greater evil until finally Men began to fear what they had brought on themselves. Many began to doubt The Majestic and their choice to follow the Stone. The Majestic began to oppress the people to keep them in line.
-* Realizing their mistake, many of the people in The Dominion begin to seek [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]] again. One man rises to lead them. Mellendil hears this Man; he is appointed the first of the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]], and given a new name: [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim]] [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_4|[4]]]
+* Realizing their mistake, many of the people in The Dominion began to seek [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil]] again. One Man rose to lead them. Mellendil heard this Man; he was appointed the first of the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]], and was given a new name: [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim]] [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_4|[4]]]
-* The words of Losdejim spread throughout The Dominion. The Seven rise up against The Majestic and the ruling Eighth Tribe. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_5|[5]]]
+* The words of Losdejim spread throughout The Dominion. The Seven rose up against The Majestic and the ruling Eighth Tribe. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_5|[5]]]
-** The Seven overcome The Majestic and The Eighth Tribe. The Night Stone is destroyed and The Majestic is slain.
+** The Seven overcame The Majestic and The Eighth Tribe. The Night Stone was destroyed and The Majestic was slain.
-* The remnants of the Eighth Tribe flee [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]]. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_6|[6]]]
+* The remnants of the Eighth Tribe fled [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Vossothos|Vossôthos]]. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_6|[6]]]
-* With the Night Stone destroyed, Losdejim is looked to as the de facto leader. The Dominion continues into a new age of uncertainty, but the people have mostly acknowledged Mellendil again. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_7|[7]]]</div>
+* With the Night Stone destroyed, Losdejim was looked to as the de facto leader. The Dominion continued into a new age of uncertainty, but the people had mostly acknowledged Mellendil again. [[Lore:Timeline (Before recorded time)#Note_7|[7]]]</div>
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 This section contains footnotes for the overall Timeline.
-# <div id="Note_1">[[Lore:Man|Man]] cannot be possessed or controlled by a Night Stone at this point in time.</div>
+# <div id="Note_1">[[Lore:Man|Man]] could not possessed or controlled by a Night Stone at this point in time.</div>
-# <div id="Note_2">Although they're mortal, their life spans are still of extraordinary length; no one notices their mortality yet.</div>
+# <div id="Note_2">Although they were mortal, their life spans were still of extraordinary length; no one noticed their mortality yet.</div>
-# <div id="Note_3">"[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]" is the only known ruling figurehead of [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]]. It is unknown if he ever went by another title.
+# <div id="Note_3">"[[Lore:The_Dominion#The_Majestic|The Majestic]]" was the only known ruling figurehead of [[Lore:The Dominion|The Dominion]]. It is unknown if he ever went by another title.
-# <div id="Note_4">The meaning of [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim's]] name remains hidden. It is revealed when [[Lore:Noralar|Noralar]] is created twenty years later, a sign of [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil’s]] providence and sovereignty.
+# <div id="Note_4">The meaning of [[Lore:Diasair#Losdejim|Losdejim's]] name remained hidden. It was revealed when [[Lore:Noralar|Noralar]] is created twenty years later, a sign of [[Lore:Driomi|Mellendil’s]] providence and sovereignty.
-# <div id="Note_5">The majority of the eighth division, however, stays on the side of The Majestic.</div>
+# <div id="Note_5">The majority of the eighth division, however, stayed on the side of The Majestic.</div>
-# <div id="Note_6">These survivors will divide into three groups:
+# <div id="Note_6">The survivors will divide into three groups:
-<ul><ul><ul><li> One group heads to the East and settles near [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Thalomvob|Thalomvob]]. This group hides in fear at first, but later repents of their sins and sues for peace with [[Lore:Gorandel (faction)|Gorandel]] (once the kingdom has been built and has expanded east to include Thalomvob). These people become the [[Lore:Thalom Sebairos|Thalom Sebairos]].</li>
+<ul><ul><ul><li> One group migrates to the East and settles near [[Lore:Gorandel (region)#Thalomvob|Thalomvob]]. This group will hide in fear at first, but later repent of their sins and sue for peace with [[Lore:Gorandel (faction)|Gorandel]] (once the kingdom has been built and has expanded east to include Thalomvob). These people become known as the [[Lore:Thalom Sebairos|Thalom Sebairos]].</li>
-<li> The second group vows to fight on against Driomi. They scatter into the lands of [[Lore:Althas|Althas]] and settle in small towns and villages.  They later conceal who they are when [[Lore:Anointed|The Anointed]] expand their realms. Others in this group infiltrate and cause general problems for the Anointed early on.</li>
+<li> The second group will vow to fight on against Driomi. They scatter into the lands of [[Lore:Althas|Althas]] and settle in small towns and villages. They later conceal who they are when tje [[Lore:Anointed|The Anointed]] will later expand their realms. Others in this group will infiltrate and cause general problems for the Anointed in their early years.</li>
 <li> The third group will split off from the second a couple generations later. They will repent for their misdeeds and, as penance for their forbearers’ sins, will vow to fight for the [[Lore:Diasair|Diasairos]] and help them fulfill their purposes. This group will become zealots that hold no allegiance towards any one faction, but only to the Diasairos themselves. Over time, they will spawn an order of zealots that include any who would seek penance for their past. Their numbers and validity shall be in flux throughout the millennia, but they will be an ever-present group (to some extent).</li></ul></ul></ul></div>
-<ol start="7"><li><div id="Note_7">By the end of this period, people begin to realize their vulnerability to the passage of time, as more and more grow older and weaker.</div></li></ol>
+<ol start="7"><li><div id="Note_7">By the end of this period, people began to realize their vulnerability to the passage of time, as more and more grow older and weaker.</div></li></ol>
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